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Favorite Sport

My favorite sport would have to be football. Football is an action-packed, exciting sport which involves many types of different people. Football has many controversial aspects and many different types of strategy. One watching the game without knowing much about it might not be too intrigued, but once you know how to play and the strategies behind it, it is much more complicated.  The crowd and environment around football games also draws much attention and attracts many various people. Football is by far my favorite game.

What is Reality?

Reality is everything that is real and exists in life, not how they appear or can be imagined.  It is the things that have happened or are happening whether you agree with them or not. Reality is the truth of life that is not dreamed of or wondered about but is actually happening in the world around us.  Reality in pictures, however, may be different.  A photograph can capture many things at different moments, times, and angles.  The reality of a picture may be portrayed as something completely different than what is actually going on, but in the picture, one may not be able to distinguish reality from nonrealistic things.

Dove Evolution: Campaign for Real Beauty- Character/Identity

Dove's new commercial for Dove products truly shows how identity and character are misshapen in today's society.  Companies and editors create images of how people should look when, in reality, it's all fake.  This video starts out with a woman sitting down in front of a mirror while being bombarded by make-up artists and stylists.  The average woman does not move while the video fast forwards through the applying of the make-up and styling of her hair.  It then proceeds to show the photoshopping which is done by a computer specialist to make her live up to today's idea of "beauty".  Then, the video starts to widen and shows the woman's face as a billboard for one of the biggest shampoo and cosmetic companies known today, Dove.  The commercial tries to show how one may "evolve" by using these Dove products; however, they completely contrast with the ideas of character and identity.  People are not meant to look the same, and each person should have their own identity, whether they are looked upon by society as "beautiful" or not.  These TV commercials persuade America to try to be like these models who, as shown in this video, are not even themselves in the first place.  With the work of technology and computer programs, these companies transform women into an image that takes away all of their character and identity and gives Americans the wrong outlook on what true beauty really is.

About Me

My name is Brett Fisher, and I was born and raised in Simpsonville, South Carolina.  I graduated from JL Mann Academy in 2011.  I grew up playing sports, and they have become a huge part of my life.  I played multiple sports, but my best sport was baseball, especially throughout high school.  I have two dogs, a Pembroke Welsch Corgi named Pete and a nine-week old Cavachon named Toby.  I enjoy going to the lake, hanging out with friends, playing sports, wakeboarding, skiing, camping, and going to the beach.